Tuesday, April 8, 2008

milton so quiet hear..were doing this as a favor...live rehearsal...looking forward to seeing you...got a hair cut today too...I did a good job I must sa
from a 646 phone number, Friday, April 4, 8:41 PM

More missives to Leila Milton, New York City bartender. I really want to know what bar she works at so I can go stalk her properly. Or, at the very least, let her know that I'm getting texts for her.

I'm particularly fond of the writing style in this one. It's a poetic use of ellipses. It makes it seem like all these unrelated thoughts, these brief fragments of ideas, are somehow connected, somehow bleeding into one. I should use ellipses more often; 646 has inspired me.

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